Unimaginable Odds
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sokimle"What does it means to be human?"
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A short poem about a different kind of love.

Unimaginable Odds

by sokimle

They Confuse you, consume you,

They seek to trouble you Making you doubt everything you do. They speak for you Then deny you

When The True You Is..

Crying out in faint sound As the voices pull you down The more you scream the less you feel

That The Love..

You seek is not where you have laid your past. It lays in the lack of love you give yourself, so hold on and fast.

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sokimle"What does it means to be human?"
a year agoReply
@bernardtwindwil thank you, thank you so so much!

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
@sokimle Life is the longest running drama of all time. Never apologize for drama. Yes you do it tastefully and at an age where many of your peers don't give a human excrement.

sokimle"What does it means to be human?"
a year agoReply
@bernardtwindwil thank you! I find your words so so sweet and encouraging! My writing style does seem a tad bit dramatic..but I try to do it tastefully, I'm grateful for your feedback (:

sokimle"What does it means to be human?"
a year agoReply
@chromium thank you! (:

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
This was introspective. It was well written. The symbolism of the words brought you message to the reader in dramatic fashion. I love the last line, "It lays in the lack of love you give yourself, so hold on and fast." That rings true for every relationship.

chromiumSilver CommaI like to think I'm amazing
a year agoReply
insightful :)