Poem on Water without the word WATER!
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sivaranjanisentPassionate poet,Writing is a blessing
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This is my poem submission for a poetry contest that demand writing a 6-8 line, Rhyme styled poem,on Water,but without using the word WATER in the poem.

Poem on Water without the word WATER!

This is my poem submission for a poetry contest

Rules of the contest:

The poetry contest demanded the following condition: •Write a poem of 6-8 lines only but don't use the word WATER

'The blue fabric ' is how I described Water...

The blue fabric draping the globe, With green patches hither and thither!

Resplendent robe it is!

Is the most resplendent robe, A planet can ever wear...

Knitting the blue fabric...

This blue fabric is knit, Joining skerrick,noble orbs of blue,

Rain ,I meant ...

Dribbling from Paradise, sheeny and nitid! Enveloping the planet with its glassy dew!

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sivaranjanisentPassionate poet,Writing is a blessing
a year agoReply
@bernardtwindwil Your comments never fail to put a grin on my face...I'm on the verge of winning..Will let u all know ,when the day of announcement arrives..thanks for encouraging

sivaranjanisentPassionate poet,Writing is a blessing
a year agoReply
@bernardtwindwil By the way ,the rule is "don't use the word WATER"..

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
I think you nailed it. Although you did not used the word "water", there was never a question of that which you were writing. The descriptive adjectives and alternate nouns portrayed both texture and color. Your reverence for hydrogen hydroxide is noted and appreciated.

sivaranjanisentPassionate poet,Writing is a blessing
a year agoReply
@lisa At present,mine has the largest number of votes and comments.Thanks for asking Lisa!

lisaSilver CommaCats
a year agoReply
that's really cool!! did u win the contest?