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shinelikestars1shy but ready to try
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Surrender shone dimly on her skin

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by shinelikestars1

She had a face conflicted Eyes swirling of melancholy "How do you feel?"

She smiled the saddest smile The past clung to her long wet eyelashes and surrender shone dimly on her skin "I feel like flying "

She looked up at the cold black sky and heard his warm laugh burn like a pleasant poison

"But If this ends like the others,

It will surely kill me."

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bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
6 months agoReply
Thi9s was ethereal and incredibly descriptive. You are on your game with this poem. It is lyrical and mysterious. It attract the reader and then does not let6 go. Great poem!!!!