how to feel alive

scripturientout of this world
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how to feel alive

by scripturient

"bury yourself",

a quiet voice in her head once said

and so she did

dug a deep grave lay down covered her body with dirt only her head was out like a gravestone

she closed her eyes

and pretended that she was dead

that's how the days have passed

until she felt more alive than ever

ironic, isn't it?

feeling alive in one's grave

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This is an interesting turn on life and death. You wrote this story with excellent wording and graphics, You definitely had the persuasiveness to get your point across.

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