Five Senses
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sapphirepeachessassy little biscuit.
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Appreciate a love that stimulates all your senses.

Five Senses

by sapphirepeaches

Sight

Sometimes I can feel him watching me when I'm not looking at him. I'm aware of his gaze on my face as I babble passionately about the injustices done by humanity and the cruelty we all face.

Hearing

I have his full attention any time I open my mouth. He listens intently as I talk about how I identify with the victims and how the stars shine brightly whenever I'm feeling lost and hopeless

Touch

Sometimes his touch is the only thing that puts me to sleep. But how can I lose consciousness when he touches me and electricity flows under my skin while he radiates admiration and amazement.

Taste

I'd swear his mouth was sculpted by god if I believed in him When I kiss him, he tastes like addiction and always leaves me craving more, there will never come a day I don't wish for his lips.

Smell

He swears I smell the best But little does he know that his scent reminds me of the calm in the eye of hurricanes, the wind moving swiftly through the mountains, petrichor after a thunderstorm

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sapphirepeachessassy little biscuit.
a year agoReply
@chromium @adritadroy @jordan thank you so much!

sapphirepeachessassy little biscuit.
a year agoReply
@bernardtwindwil I'm glad you enjoyed it! I get so nervous posting things like this but I'm glad I did. I appreciate you commenting on my use of the five senses, I was debating for a while what angle to take so it's nice to know people enjoyed it.

chromiumSilver CommaI like to think I'm amazing
a year agoReply
amazinggg :) so beautifully written!

adritadroyBronze CommaI am a lover of language, are you?
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*puppy eyed*

jordanBronze Commai'm moderately cool
a year agoReply
love this!

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
This was beautifully written. Your description are beyond the mere sentiment. They are deeply sensual and emotionally charged. We only know by our senses of the universe around us. Your use of the five physical senses is stellar. I've notices the same sensitivities in your other works.