Suitcase
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Suitcase

by rose4112

You are forever

Even though you're gone

Unfortunately when people leave they don't take their memories with them

Cause when you left you didn't take the night we laid in the car together and listened to all your favorite songs

You didn't pack away all the I love you's and forevers

You didn't pick up the way it felt to sleep next to you and put it in your suitcase with your belongings.

No

You left those things behind to haunt my dreams at night

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jennyBronze Commahayniac 'LD' musiclover
10 months agoReply
this made me to remember someone special, awesome loved it!

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
10 months agoReply
This was plaintive yet not wallowing in self-pity. The doleful nature of ypour words set a somber scene. Good job.

LostInMyDreamsCommabassadorDelving deeper into the unknown
10 months agoReply
Loved it!