Hatred
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richieteomejorJust a new poet :)
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This might be creepy but it's all about the zeal(lol). But enjoy and have a nice day :)

Hatred

by Richie

There's a demon in my head, Possessing me,

I can only feel hate, It's overpowering me.

Bloody intentions in my head, Hope to see her dead,

Hope to see her bathed in red, For all the tears I shed.

It makes me even angrier, When she's with another guy,

But it makes me even subtle, The innocent guy now sly.

Until the moment she stumbled, When death open its door,

You will see her suffer, Then you will see her no more...

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a year ago
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Feels good man :)

richieteomejorJust a new poet :)
a year ago
Nothing...
Basically how I feel about humanity...



rancelandstrongBronze CommaOf course I like my own things.
a year agoReply
Yes.

sydneyVerifiedco-creator of Commaful
a year agoReply
@richieteomejor whoa! while creepy, unfortunately it's something that does seem to happen more often than it should :( or sometimes in a less extreme extent. great poem!

tbanarchyGifted WriterI am a snarky freelance writer.
a year agoReply
Man, I thought MY stuff was non-PC!

lisaSilver CommaCats
a year agoReply
whoaa this i scary. something like this happened in my neighborhood not too long ago. well at least an attempt at something like this. luckily she got away and the guy sits in jail.....really nice poem!

erofaerSilver CommaHow can I be impressive in one sentence?
a year agoReply
Love it. Creepy is nice. Actually no not always.

a year agoReply
You are so creepy... Like me...

a year agoReply
Fuck stupid cheaters, heartbreakers and all the bimbos out there!!!

khaiminNavi fanboy xD
a year agoReply
Dude this is so scary but I loved it

a year agoReply
Man that was creepy but well said, I got that kind of feeling too when my ex cheated on me :(