Eternal friendship?
Eternal friendship?
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rainandsnow
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The poem is about the friendship between a guy and a girl that ended on a sour note.

Eternal friendship?

by rainandsnow

Its quiet on the outside, And quiet on the inside, But between the both of us, Silence was always a joyride.

I am awake and its the middle of night, I hear a voice calling out to me, There you are, in a text message, And my mouth curves into a smile.

Down we go yet again, The same old path, the same old you and I, The same old destination and the same old words, But yet I feel no pain.

Your smile is as warm as the hearth, Your temper as calm as the night, I know you are somewhere nearby, When I feel all the mirth.

Days and weeks have passed, Its the silence before the storm, I am afraid of the havoc that will follow, I will always regret I never asked.

This is how it went down in flames, What about best friends forever ? What about all the time we spent together ? And the promises, were they all just games ?

All those secrets I knew, Will be etched in my heart forever, There's no new hope on this deserted shore, As I endure the misfortunes of dark without you.

Forget about me, if you will, Curse me, if you will, Hate me, if you will, But please try and forgive me, if you can.

Thanks a lot for reading !

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a year agoReply
@dannibear1461 I am glad you could understand all the feelings and emotions that I tried to portray. 😃 It's always good to know that you have touched someone's heart with mere words!

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a year agoReply
@bernardtwindwil You just described everyone's feelings(including me) in a few lines! And when my stories touch someone's heart well....it makes writing worthwhile.

rainandsnowBronze Commabooks+music=true love
a year agoReply
@pluto Thank you so much!

plutoCommabassadorPlanets man
a year agoReply
this is one of the most amazing stories <3 so sad!

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
Somehow eternal friendship is always the promise. There are cherry blossoms and bright full moons. Holding hands walking in the shadows of great oaks. Then it becomes about the used tube of toothpaste. The open jar of pickles. When the ethereal is replaced by commonplace , the Eternal becomes finite and soon. You have probably hit a raw nerve in all of us.

dannibear1461Bronze CommaMum, Novice at poetry
a year agoReply
This really touched a chord with me, beautiful written of how it starts and ends :)

hideandseekWriter, poet, singer, artist, runner...
a year agoReply
@rainandsnow you're so very welcome! :)

rainandsnowBronze Commabooks+music=true love
a year agoReply
@hideandseek Glad to know that you are okay. :) And thank you so much. :) :)

hideandseekWriter, poet, singer, artist, runner...
a year agoReply
@rainandsnow thank you so much for that, it's nice to know I'm not alone in situations like this. I'm actually okay, it was just one of those out of the blue type of things, you know? But anyhoo keep on writing, this poem is amazing!

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a year agoReply
@jeremiah I am sorry. I honestly wish that no one can relate to this poem, because well...I know the pain is too much. Thanks for the appreciation though. :)