Let's make it right!
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rainandsnowbooks+music=true love
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NOTE: You can replace 'he' with 'she' and then 'I' represents a girl.
Dedicated to the LGBT community. I find it strange that we, even with our "evolved" brains, cannot accept something so simple. We are no one to treat the community as an outcast. All they ask for is love in this harsh world, so why do we have to be so heartless?

And to all those who shout out that being gay is against some religion, I would just like to say that in a way the gay community is serving the world. They adopt the children heterosexuals might have left behind. And I truly think that the child wouldn't mind if he has two daddies or mommies. He would just expect love, care and support and being gay doesn't mean they are incapable of providing those basic needs. This is a bit rude reasoning but well....I had to say it!

So let us all start being more of humans with a heart, mind and soul.

Wrote it at the spur of the moment, so words are not so good. I do hope the meaning is clear. :)

Let's make it right!

by rainandsnow NOTE: Here "I" represents a random guy.

He is leaning against the counter, My heart beats a bit louder, He has a smile radiant, I am lost in his eyes, colored variant.

They smile, they stare, they do not care, Maybe they have never witnessed a love so rare, They curse, they sneer, they call upon their god, Why do they always find us so odd ?

I hold his hand across the table, Why do I feel we are being labelled ? Stung with venomous words day and night, We are like a dear caught in the headlights.

He promises it will be all fine, Our stars will someday align, May it rain or snow, "I will always be there, you know."

Can you blame me if I fear ? One day he will go out for a walk and then never come back here ? A man's rage can be like thunder, So will the sun of our life go under ?

Does your god really distinguish the black from white ? Love is like a ray of hope bursting through the night, So why does it so much matter, Whom I love and marry later ?

I wish you would ask me "How was your day?", I am a human even though I am gay, All I am asking is stop calling me weird, Because you would surely know, love is unconditional, dear.

Thanks a lot for reading!

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a year agoReply
@bluntpoet :) :) thank you!

bluntpoetBronze CommaI am the weirdo smelling books' pages
a year agoReply
This was so touching and positive and just so incredible! The meaning is perfectly clear, don't worry. :) I just wish it had more upvotes!

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a year agoReply
@bernardtwindwil Your reviews are poetry within themselves. Thank you so much for the appreciation! :)

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
I love the heroic couplets. Craftsmanship from the old days along with feeling from here and now. This was an excellent piece of poetry. You presented your point without destroying the art of the poem.

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a year agoReply
@pluto Thank you so much!

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a year agoReply
whoa. amazing <3 the meaning is indeed clear!