Pretending to be asleep doesn't work
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pluzooCommunity member
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A story that always scares the living shit out of me. A murder that surprises a young boy who pretends to sleep. This is a visual rendition of a creepy pasta I read and liked

Pretending to be asleep doesn't work

by pluzoo

A young boy is sleeping in his bed on a usual night. He hears footsteps outside his door, and peeks out of his eyes to see what is happening.

His door swings open quietly to reveal a murderer carrying the corpses of his parents.

After silently propping the corpses up on a chair, the murderer writes something on the wall in the blood of the dead bodies. He then hides under the child's bed.

The child is scared beyond belief. He can’t read the writing on the wall and he knows the man is under his bed.

Like any child, he pretends that he slept through the whole thing and hasn’t awoken yet. He lays still as the bodies, quietly hearing the breathes from under his bed.

An hour passes, and his eyes are adjusting more and more to the darkness. He tries to make out the words, but it’s a struggle. He gasps when he finally makes out the sentence.

"I know you're awake." He feels something shift under his bed.

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potatoesarefab14 yrs. old || a writer || photography
19 days agoReply
omg creepypasta is <3

4 months agoReply
This scared the shit outta me tf

5 months agoReply
???? this isn't scary and there's no story

5 months agoReply
@ryleecat thanks :)

ryleecatLove to write, poetry is my fav. ; )
5 months agoReply
Ahhhhhhh dun-dun-duuuuuun! That was cute! It made me laugh, good job you!

pluxoa dumb kid
5 months agoReply
spooky iudchzdkshfzk

feloniousincrediblesubstantial.tumblr.com
5 months agoReply
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FrostnLilithWattpad & WordKrowd - @FrostnLilith
5 months agoReply
Cliché

basharasweetWriter hopefully...
5 months agoReply
O_O

tdog1614 and excited!
5 months agoReply
Holy carp!!!! Yup alright maybe I shouldn't pretend to sleep anymore!