All The Things Wrong With This World
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pennyI live for life
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Some things just make no sense.

All The Things Wrong With This World

We sell beauty and buy love

We kill in order to live

We work in order to rest.

We ignore people to get attention

We wage war in order to have peace.

Am I the only one that feels this way?

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pennySilver CommaI live for life
a year ago
"Mom!!? Don't freak out but i'm in the hospital..."
omg so dramatic

pennySilver CommaI live for life
10 months ago
One dark night a man and woman walked into a hotel
you will be rewarded for your good deeds.

pennySilver CommaI live for life
8 months ago
May you fall in love with someone, who never gets tired of saving you ...
can you feel the love?



pennySilver CommaI live for life
7 months agoReply
@prokatstination that's great feedback thanks!

prokatstinationI guess I'm pretty cool.
7 months agoReply
I can't help but wonder if you've considered why we do these things? This world is broken, and you're not the only person who thinks about these things, but why not explore why people do these things instead of throwing out there simplistic comments about the world. Explore why they're wrong. I think that'd really enrich your writing and make it more compelling.

navynohwal30Gifted Writer♏️ & Rêver
8 months agoReply
hit me in the feels

ritikaBronze CommaJust a thinker, bleeding ink into rhythm
9 months agoReply
Great! 👏

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
9 months agoReply
You are neither the only one but you are also far from the first. The ills you inventory are but symptoms of the industrial/capitol society. As far back as the 1840s Henry David Thoreau railed upon it. As di Walt Whitman, The muckrakers, Ezra Pound, Robert Frost, Lawrence Ferlinghetti, and now you. Congratulation you join a band of heros. Great work~!!!!

chachaSMILE
10 months agoReply
omg so true