breathing in petals
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breathing in petals

by pendekarsarden

my body is a field of

decaying flowers and manic butterflies

autumn

is leaving but thats okay

i will wait

for spring to come

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I enjoyed this. Your construction of the stanzas was stellar. You gave us the message in short savory bites. You wording of the poem was a great use of your language skills. You must be congratulated for writing such a deep and meaningful poem.