First, some clarification. Some ((ONLY SOME, MOST IS REAL.)) is made up. But this is based off of a true story. It was a real woman. Who really went back for a child. On the Titanic.
I'm turning this in, and what do you guys think?
(Hudson is her husband, btw)
Hudson, Loraine, Major Peuchen, Harry Molson and I had just finished dinner, I picked up Lori, and told my husband that I wanted to look at the Jacobean dining room,
as I heard it looked exquisite. "Of course dear. Hurry back though." I assured him I would, pecked him on the cheek and walked off, holding Lori on my hip.
"Come on, doesn't this look so pretty?" I asked my two year old. Then, I felt a sudden jerk. The lights started flickering, and Lori started to whimper.
I looked out a nearby window, to see what all the commotion was about, and saw that the device that kept us afloat had been damaged.
I rushed to the deck, where everyone else went, calling for my husband, and our baby son, Trevor. “Hudson! Trevor!" I went to the lifeboats, to check if they were there, but they weren't.
Another young woman told me, "Oh, is your husband Mr. Allison?" I nodded, clinging to my daughter. "He's being lowered in a boat on the other side of the ship.
I ran as fast as I could, but when I got there, my husband wasn't there.
The ship jerked again, and someone grabbed me and Lori, and tried to forcibly put me on a boat. "No! Not without my baby!" I shouted, and fought against the man's grip.
I dragged Lori out of the boat, and went to go check our room, and no one was there. The flickering lights went out completely. There was a shudder, and a nasty sounding crack.
I could feel the boat tipping. I tried running back to the deck. I heard someone screaming, "No! My wife is still aboard! Wait, stop!" It was Hudson.
He scrambled back on the ship, and started to say, "Its okay, Trevor's with Alic--" Another crack, and another. The ship snapped in half. The ship started sliding into the water.
I held Loraine close to me. She was screaming and crying, and I cradled her, crying, and wanting so much to tell her everything would be okay. I felt water. I tried to keep us above the waves.
The current was strong, and it pulled me under. I tried to push Lori up, as I went down. I struggled with the waves, until Loraine's screams slowly subsided. Her body went limp.
"No...no...no....NO! HUDSON! Someone help me!" I clung to my young daughter's body, screaming, and crying for someone to help. I saw a boat, with people pointing at me.
I screamed, and cried, before being pulled under by a wave again. I inhaled water, and kept getting pulled under. My lungs and eyes burned from the salt water. Then, I started to sink.
Down, down, down. Then, everything went black.
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