(a)jar
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olifinch182thinker of tender thoughts
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(a)jar

by olifinch182

i planted myself in your head / could you mind what's mine?

forget-me-nots. the embodiment of my greatest fear and deepest intent, struggling to break through to the sunlight in a confinement cell next to a girl with her heart the same. coincidence?

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olifinch182thinker of tender thoughts
a year ago
when you left.

olifinch182thinker of tender thoughts
a year ago
missing.
compilation of three poems that maybe go well toge...

olifinch182thinker of tender thoughts
a year ago
#74
observations at a fairly local bar.



bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
This was a cleverly thought out poem. I liked the compact nature that was well written and a great message.

plutoCommabassadorPlanets man
a year agoReply
@olifinch182 really clever!

olifinch182thinker of tender thoughts
a year agoReply
@pluto it was originally just gonna be jar (lame but simple) and I thought about the word ajar- open. basically the title was thought if because of the parenthesis giving it double meanings- a jar, and open.

plutoCommabassadorPlanets man
a year agoReply
how did you come up with the title?