Peppermints.
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Peppermints.

by nouies

If I corroded in a sea of pipe dreams and indecision-

Would you salvage me?

Bore a savage to stagnation and complacency-

Would you hold on?

Rhetorical questions, and anecdotes of a unrequited nature

It seemed to heavy for them.

Perilous prince and demon in dispose

My eyes a ripened red and you bit into worms of avarice feasting off a rotting disdain.

The taste of passivity dripped from tongue and lip.

Those hands reached for petals from a somber flower- a potential rose, albeit discard the fruit of our labor

Different hands pressed and palmed the thorns

disregard the core of fruitless efforts to shock the nerves, trigger the memories of discrepancy.

Mistaken white lost to starlight.

In this we were pristine and unsullied then ragged and uninspired by winter- burgundy by spring.

All those roses wilted.

A garden for restless behavior.

A taste for Chrysanthemums and savory mint thereafter

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bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
9 months agoReply
@nouies Don't worry about reciprocation. I comment because I want to, not so you will read my scribbles.

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9 months agoReply
@bernardtwindwil I rarely check the comments or activity on this site but I just want to say thank you for always being supportive and giving constructive feedback; It means a lot. I'm definitely catching up on your work soon.

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
9 months agoReply
This had depths of esoteric thought that I seldom see. It transcended the mundane and the limited personal view. You crossed into a world of pure idealism. The words were well chosen to convey those thoughts. Great work!!