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Noilet me breathe///
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Nice

I mean yeah idk why i wrote this but its whatever so i hope u enjoy it.

Found a girl Blue eyes, pitch black hair Perfect , she seemed nice Fantastic even, for my heart To fall again.

She seemed nice When she looked at me With those loving eyes She seemed nice When from the corner of this room filled with strangers Smiled, and a thousand butterflies then have risen

Found a girl Had an unique style, voice in my head Tell me now, could she be the one? She seems nice Fantastic even, for my heart To fall again.

If you jump, ill jump too And if you look away, ill find another way But if you run, im sorry then My feet are tired, and im slower day by day Please understand I dont want to rub my forhead

Found a girl, she says polite lies She seemed nice But all that was there, its a lie And you’ve got a lover i know I gotta move on now Found a girl, she seemed nice But it was all a lie.

If ill ever find someone again , i hope they will be nice Not like you, with lies But i hope i will not ever fall again for someone that only seems nice.

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bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
8 months agoReply
That was well written. The first thing I like were your arrangement of stanzas in a melodic continuum. The second thing is the meter you established by the repetitions. Third, your word choice conveyed this hopefulness crashing down . Masterful! I am going to give you some free advice on women (note that I have been married for 42 yrs). Stop looking for "the one". Look for the "one of many". Great post!!!!