A few shorts poems ive written when i was a bit uninspired and inspired at the same time.
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Noilet me breathe///
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A few shorts poems ive written when i was a bit uninspired and inspired at the same time.

by Noi

I hate to see you cry, i wish i could only see you smiling you have the brightest smile, yet the saddest eyes Your soul is colorfull your mind is wonderfull yet you barely say a few words

If we play hide and seek I'd be the winner cause im the best in running and hiding from the world But if you find me ever i promise i wont ever hide and let you hold my hands.

If i look at the sky i see clouds if i look at the ground i see grass if i look at you i see the beauty that you can only see that is made by nature.

i love it when it rains not because people wont know that im crying but because when it rains, i can say that even the clouds are crying they are crying of how much earth suffers.

I can't reach the stars, i can't fly i will drown in the ocean, i can't swim but i can walk on the ground with my head wandering up above the universe.

This town is silent, people live better in the night they don't get into fights they fall in love they sing love songs and they kiss red cheeks.

If i could erase all my memories i'd have to think twice what to erase you are in every one of them, even if even if in real life, you already left my life years ago.

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Noilet me breathe///
a year ago
Tales of a good heart.

Noilet me breathe///
a year ago
To my favorite teacher from 8th grade.

Noilet me breathe///
a year ago
Love



bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
9 months agoReply
First, let's talk about the wording. It was clever and well crafted. The internal and external rhymes were ingenious. Next, the meter and stanzas were so well put together it was lyrical. Can you guess what's next? Them message was tender and inspirational. Great poem!!!!