The window
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nightwishesI think too much and write too little
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The window

by nightwishes

The window's open The air is fresh

I'm dancing here alone, in a dress

I see him walking abruptly and stop he's starring at me and I might be in shock

I think he saw me dancing alone inviting him to dance on his own

Now the windows closed and the air is a mess

but we're dancing here alone in a dress

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asesariBronze Commahelp the earth
10 months agoReply
this is a beautiful poem! i loved it :) you write really well !

nightwishesI think too much and write too little
a year agoReply
@bernardtwindwil omg I'm so surprised, but it makes really happy that you like it and can identify yourself with it!!

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
I loved this poem. There was no maudlin self-effacing rambling. This is how I have lived life. It has worked for me. The words you used came on as a simple and sweet fun afternoon. Just wow. Great Poem!!!