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navynohwal30
navynohwal30♏️ & Rêver
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You should have left before you came ...

You said...

by Navy⚓

You said I was the reason you smile..

then why did you leave me cold.. on the floor.. without the strength for my lips to form a curve...

You said don't worry i will be there

but you ran away.. when i was nothing more than a shattered glass.. were you scared that picking me up will make you bleed?

you said i needed rest..

and then you put my faith..my trust... to a life long sleep in the coffin of your sugar coated talks...

you said you won't let anyone touch me

then why did you send misery to hug me??

you said i was your life..your brightness...

then why did you leave me in the haunted house of my sorrow.. where the demons inside me fed on my tears...

You said you will be broken if i left

but you left me dying.. weeping... crumbled... it felt like a dagger to my heart..

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navynohwal30Gifted Writer♏️ & Rêver
8 months ago
Oh them brown eyes.. Part:2
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navynohwal30Gifted Writer♏️ & Rêver
8 months ago
♛ Castle: rebuilding the broken me ♛
I am strong enough to be without you

navynohwal30Gifted Writer♏️ & Rêver
5 months ago
It ain't me.
She is pretty, gorgeous and famous. Just like you....



5 months agoReply
HARROWING experience!! Had tears in my eyes reading this... but great work :) PROUD OF YOU!! :*

navynohwal30Gifted Writer♏️ & Rêver
6 months agoReply
@hishamfarhatt pleasure is mine

hishamfarhattAuthor of many genres, Hope you enjoy!
6 months agoReply
i love this

navynohwal30Gifted Writer♏️ & Rêver
8 months agoReply
@tdog16 m glad u liked it

tdog16Gifted Writer14 and excited!
8 months agoReply
Very nice

navynohwal30Gifted Writer♏️ & Rêver
8 months agoReply
@janaemitchell omg! m so glad ..u found me capable enough love ya! tysm

janaemitchellVerifiedYA Author & Random Awkward Dancer
8 months agoReply
This is really good. You should enter it in Commaful's contest: https://commaful.com/cont...

navynohwal30Gifted Writer♏️ & Rêver
8 months agoReply
@adelinefecker m glad u liked it..it just came out as i was writing this poem..!!

adelinefeckerBronze CommaDeep thoughts over coffee...
8 months agoReply
The broken glass metaphor was my fav!

navynohwal30Gifted Writer♏️ & Rêver
8 months agoReply
@misterjeyen yea! maybe