Dominick

@mrgoldyloxs

Aspiring author who loves to write


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Dominick . 3 years ago
The Spirit Era
The world is reintroduced to magic when an unexplained explosion happens within the earth. This burst of energy changes everything into a magical world free for all where only the strong survive.
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Dominick . 3 years ago
Cracking The Father Code (Preview) 2/2
But right as i thought that i heard some shouting from up the road. I gazed up to find a tall muscular man with sleeve tattoos and a larger woman with short curly red hair barreling towards me yelling...
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Dominick . 3 years ago
Cracking The Father Code (Preview) 1/2
The cool spring air whirled around me as I stepped out into the New York City streets. The cars rushed by, honking angrily as they rushed to their destination. The early sunrise creeped across the sky...
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Dominick . 4 years ago
One Sentence
I sat there in class a pain in my heart. Why am I here? I look around and no one sees me, I could walk out. The ringing of the bell is like music the sweet release of class. I walk through crowded hal...
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Dominick . 4 years ago
if anyone believes they're nothing that they'd be better off dead or just feeling like life is tough you NEED to read this cause you are worth it and you are loved by someone!
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π’«π’Άπ“ƒπ’ΉπŸ’π“‡π’Ά π‘€π“Žπ“π‘’π“ˆ . 4 years ago
100 reasons why you should stay alive.
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Dominick . 4 years ago
beautiful and well inspired hope this helps anyone who needs it this person wrote it beautifully!
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Jamie . 5 years ago
I'm Here
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Dominick . 4 years ago
such good advice. I know I don't have many followers but I hope all of you will read this.
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Pratanu . 4 years ago
How to Get Reward in Writing
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Dominick . 4 years ago
Beneath the Blossoms Pt4
"Oh Edwin it's you!" she said, sounding excited to see me. I stood there in shock. I wanted to go home and hide. How could this be happening to me?
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Dominick . 4 years ago
Beneath the Blossoms Pt3
I turned over facing away from her. Why did I start to open up? I promised myself I wouldn't open up to anyone else. So why did I? What about her made me open up? "Are you ok?" Sylvia asked.
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Dominick . 4 years ago
IDK what to call this so for now its unnamed. Give me suggestions. PART 1
Today's the day. The day I ask Maria to marry me. We had been dating for almost a year and I had saved up enough to buy a ring and get a reservation at the fanciest place in town. I have an hour bef...
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Dominick . 4 years ago
Part 2 of me trying something new. Beneath The Blossoms.
"Oh really? So this is English," she replied as if it was the most fascinating thing she's ever seen. "We don't have much more time so I'm going in. You can do whatever you want." I said rather...
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Dominick . 4 years ago
Im trying something new i have named it Beneath the Blossoms....pt1
I've never seen the appeal of falling in love. Everyone around me is trying desperately to find love only to be hurt then repeat. When my father left me and my mom she was torn to shreds even now in h...
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Dominick . 4 years ago
The Galius War Pt 3
"Whatever." She pulls my head on her lap and says, "try and rest. You barely slept at all last night."
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Dominick . 4 years ago
The Galius War pt 2
"Sito Jackson you are here under arrest for illegal magic and will be put to death." the commander bellowed. "What? I don't understand I have never used magic once in my life.'' I stuttered, anxiet...
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Dominick . 4 years ago
The Galius War
In the large world of Gerstein a full out war between the empire and galius is raging. The empire trying to eradicate all people with control over magic while the people of Galius desperately fighting...
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