This is a quick, romantic short story about love and waffles. I work for a store that has a surplus of waffles and I would like to market them as a "romantic" item come Valentine's day. These well be made into stickers that will go on the packaging and I want to do a short except or intro to use as an 8.5/11 poster for the display. There are grammatical errors I need to fix but I'm especially looking for your feedback on the content. Was it boring, too lengthy, just cheesy enough? Also, suggestions for something short to introduce the story with (this is for a poster and needs to be sorry enough to grab the interest of people preoccupied with shopping).