Tell me
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monovergaraMusic artist
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Tell me

by monovergara

it doesnt matter the distance just call me and i'm willing

that was before the lies you said to me

like the night you kissed with someone else

it was you!

forgeting about me

i felt like that was not fair

So tell me

if there is something about me

is still getting you emotions

if you wanna feel it

i don't care!

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bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
Nice expressions of betrayal without getting maudlin. The meter was off in a couple of verses. I think you could make them smoother, but don't change the message for sake of structure. Very good poem!