I LEFT MY BODY !
I LEFT MY BODY ! smoking stories
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mohamedghofrane
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Hello i'm new to writing and this is the starting of a novel that i'm working on what do you think about my writing style and the idea and do you have any advises for me to improve and get new ideas ? :D
follow me if you like this i'll try on working on something better and maybe even finishing the novel

I LEFT MY BODY !

I got out to the balcony to smoke my cigarette as always, I sat on the bench and I lighted my late-night friend.

The sky that night was a full moon, I forgot to bring my headphones this time but it was no problem.

Are you listening my friend?

That's the sound of silence all the city is sleeping, I'm the only awake person here, I'm the only person here and you are my only companion, my only friend in this solitude.

Solitude.

Think about this my friend, imagine that everyone just vanishes suddenly, what will we do?

It looks fun right? We will be free to do whatever we like, we can go anywhere anytime, do whatever we like...

As I'm sucking life out of my friend and exhaling his soul that he gave me I felt like I was the one that got exhaled, I felt like I flew, I was so light, I felt like I am just a smoke.

I closed my eyes for a second loving every breath of that cigarette, loving and admiring the sound of silence and solitude.

In the darkness I opened my eyes just to see the tiny pinpoint light of my cigarette fading away so I said goodbye and reached out to my pocket and lit another one.

As I'm staring at my companion rose back from ashes just like a phoenix, I felt like I'm not in my balcony, I'm on the road,

I looked up and I was chilled as look at my balcony and I saw myself just sitting there still smoking and enjoying the cold night.

I LEFT MY BODY.

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