The end
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mjrAs much criticism as possible, please
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The end

by mjr

I feel like I'm slipping away a little more each day I thought I'd been tossed a rope to pull me out I had no doubt, I grabbed the rope and we both snapped I had my life mapped out

But now I'm done

I've taped out I've reached my end, the last of my list of friends

my very last is sure to pass sooner or later, this is it my last candle has been lit, its sad this outcome

I predicted it

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This was very evocative of a person in desparate straights. It was veryn well written I loved the rhyme and meter. Great poem!!!!!