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LunaGrimmJust an ordinary space kid.
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This is an untitled story.

Untitled.

by LunaGrimm

To my friends and family, you will never read this, none of you will. Unless I were to show you but no, no.

To my friends and family, this is my truce.

My white flag.

My surrender, as I now leave the battlefield of war that wages in me, I leave to wonder space.

To roam the misty and green covered mountains.

To tour the cities of Heaven and Hell, as I'm not sure where my sentence will send me.

The lights of a city, remain on all day and all hours of the night like your beautiful souls.

However, this old busted bulb can't stay lit anymore.

To my friends and family.

You will never read this.

This, is my truce.

My white flag.

My surrender.

To my friends and family,

I leave to wonder space.

Sincerely,

Luna Grimm.

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LostInMyDreamsCommabassadorDelving deeper into the unknown
9 months agoReply
I honestly am glad that you are here today to share this letter. Many people can and do relate to the words written here. I know it's personal, but I'm glad you shared it with us.

LunaGrimmBronze CommaJust an ordinary space kid.
9 months agoReply
@sydney if it's too personal I don't reveal the title, or it's a revision of an old writing it also doesn't have the title revealed. This was an old suicide note I came across, so I wrote it differently.

sydneyVerifiedco-creator of Commaful
9 months agoReply
amazing job!!! you have a very unique style to your stories. why was this untitled :)

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
9 months agoReply
Wow. This is an awesome piece of literature. The stark symbolism creates a surreal imagery. You took us on an epic journey. Great job!!!!!!