The Outsiders
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LostInMyDreamsDelving deeper into the unknown
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A little story about The Outsiders

The Outsiders

by LostInMyDreams

They say you're never alone as long as you have people around.

I beg to differ.

I was just fine having my family. And plenty of time to myself.

It wasn't until The Outsiders were introduced.

I would share with them a part of me. Only for them to take off and leave with it.

I even cared for some of The Outsiders. Their lives either ended too soon or their parents uprooted them to another state.

I even loved some of The Outsiders. They were the ones who caused the most pain.

These Outsiders would turn their feelings on and off as they pleased. This was hard to accept when my feelings were always on.

I never felt so alone in my life.

The more Outsiders I seem to let in, the more alone I seem to feel.

They say you're never alone as long as you have people around.

As long as those people aren't The Outsiders.

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tabnash24Silver CommaYou'll know me as you read ;)
6 months agoReply
@LostInMyDreams You're welcome and keep writing. :)

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6 months agoReply
@tabnash24 Thank you!! I tend to write about my emotions in an indirect way. I want to tell my story, but never a detailed account of what actually happens in my life. I'm glad you enjoyed my story, and thanks for commenting!

tabnash24Silver CommaYou'll know me as you read ;)
6 months agoReply
Your idea was amazing, like how you specified and defined exactly what your emotions consider as "The Outsider". To be honest, explaining a subjective idea can be hard sometimes but you did it well. Good job! ;)

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7 months agoReply
@bernardtwindwil Thank for commenting and the kind complements. I always look forward to your thoughts!

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
7 months agoReply
This was well written. I loved the "Outsider" theme. This was descriptive and well thought out. I am seeking improvement is your writing. Great post!!!!