Still, I Love You
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Still, I Love You

by lost

I loved you.

I loved you from the start. I'd give you the world, but she held your heart.

But she loved another

He was not you. You told me it crushed you. You're crushing me too.

Time flew by fast

She broke it off with him But you loved her no more. You told me your love dimmed.

We speak more and more

For no reason, for no task I think you like me now I think I might ask

I'm smiling, I'm hopeful

But then, in a blur There, I see you And you're talking to her.

I frown and I mumble

You're only friends, yes, I see But then I recall All the time you've talked to me

Three years had gone by

and I still like you what made you any different you could like her still, too

My heart sinks, as I realize

you'll get her. you will. You never did like me. You love her

You love her still.

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lostBronze CommaI'm still here
a year agoReply
@michaelschulze Unfortunately for both of us we feel the same thing.

a year agoReply
The sadest love unrequited love Alas i know that feeling way way to well

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
@lost Encouragement is one of my goals. Remember, there is no such thing as bad poetry. It is merely unappreciated poetry.

lostBronze CommaI'm still here
a year agoReply
@bernardtwindwil Thank you so much! I always appreciate your comments on my writing. They encourage me to write more and more.

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
The meter you put into this poem was spectacular. The words flowed like a magic melody. The words evoke so much emotion from me that I had to re-read it. Your message is so honest and sincere that it shows right through your words. Great job Great poem!!~!~!

lostBronze CommaI'm still here
a year agoReply
@_notlikeothers_ Comments like yours motivate me to write about emotions that are closer to my heart. Thank you!

_notlikeothers_Bronze CommaNotLikeOtherPeople🎈
a year agoReply
It was beautifuly written and I would change nothing

_notlikeothers_Bronze CommaNotLikeOtherPeople🎈
a year agoReply
This made me get the feels and well freaking hell I can't get over this