The girl with bees in her belly
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lbingamenNo boundaries
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My words are sweet as honey. Trying to describe someone giving you a lot to say/feel. Not wanting it to end.

The girl with bees in her belly

by lbingamen

You've had me choking on honeycombs And the wax is in my teeth

I know soon the bees will come And they'll be looking for me

Oh they want their sugar And I don't need cavities

So i'll open my mouth and let them have it And they will live inside me

I will be the girl with bees in her belly And when I cough some will leave

Even though I can't help it I'll lose some parts of me

Though it hurts when they sting I just want them to stay

I will miss my honey Because its the only thing you gave

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@bernardtwindwil thank you so much! That makes me so happy. I just turned 19 last month! Hopefully my writing continues to grow with me.

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2 months agoReply
You juast blew me away with this poem. It was exquisite. That is no hyperbolic bullshit. You had sound, buzzing. You had taste and texture, honey and wax, you had tactile feeling and pain in the bees and their sting. The visuals of flower petals. You touched all the bases with the five senses and paid homage to the sixth. You go girl! Her is the real wonder woman. How old are you? Great poem!!!