Just Breathing?
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laxamanaysaWriting is my escape from the real world
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The ideas given by Commaful inspire me and motivate me each day and reading other's works makes me want to write more as well. Personally, I think this post feels a bit rushed and it's too short. What do you think?

Just Breathing?

by laxamanaysa

Everyday, every night we breath.

Inhale, exhale. Breath in and out.

We are so used to it, we always do it every single day,

But my question is, are we actually living? Because I think we are just simply being alive and just breathing.

Because today, I learned to not just be alive.

Because what's the point of being alive if you' re not actually living?

We are like zombies.

We wake up, work, eat sleep and wake up all over again. What's the point? Is there even a reason?

Because the best thing about being alive is to feel.

And be part of something. Just like what others says; live life to the fullest.

We must remember that.

"The whole point about being alive is to evolve into the complete person you were intended to be." -Oprah

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sydneyVerifiedco-creator of Commaful
9 months agoReply
I really liked the raw emotion in it. Often we go through like just going through the motions, rather than cherishing every breath

laxamanaysaGifted WriterWriting is my escape from the real world
9 months agoReply
@michaelschulze @bernardtwindwil Thank you!

9 months agoReply
Straight to the point so many people go through thair the entire lives without actually living it beatfully written

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
9 months agoReply
I dislike Oprah. That being said, you have produced a poem dispensing the wisdom of the ages. I have said the same thing but I lack your elegant eloquence. Great poem!!!!!