Beautiful But Broken
  11 likes
  •   4 comments
Share

laxamanaysaWriting is my escape from the real world
Autoplay OFF  •  10 months ago
I'm back.

Beautiful But Broken

by laxamanaysa

A smile on her face With sadness tucked within

Walking away with no one to embrace

Oh how, beautiful it could’ve been

Joy that filled you each day

Now replaced with sorrow as the skies turned gray Your laughs as you talk with your friends Has now disappeared when the day ends

She fell because she wanted to

But she couldn’t save herself Now alone, she knew it was true That she was broken once again

Tears on her pillow As she cried each night

She was thrown out the window Not even bothering to find a bit of light

A broken story, a broken past When will this last?

She tried hard, but her words were unspoken

After all, she was beautiful but broken

Stories We Think You'll Love
laxamanaysaWriting is my escape from the real world
a year ago
Friendships
Dedicated to my friends who are always there for m...

laxamanaysaWriting is my escape from the real world
a year ago
Moving On
Moving On.

laxamanaysaWriting is my escape from the real world
a year ago
Quotes That I Love
Quotes that inspires me to be a better person and ...



10 months agoReply
If only all the beautiful broken people could come together what a beautiful mosaic that would make nice post

bernardtwindwilGifted WriterGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
10 months agoReply
Your technical proficiency shown through in this poem. The plaintive nature of the message cast a sadness over the entire piece. Your words evoked sadness and empathy for the "broken girl". You are a gigantic talent. Great job!!!!

sydneyVerifiedco-creator of Commaful
10 months agoReply
Fantastic job!! Such a lyrical story!

rinkikaKinda sad but I'm still kickin
10 months agoReply
Can I like put a melody to this and like tell you the notes or whatever this is so amazing