Masked Love
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kassaundrachur1I write about serious issues in society
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A love story between two people who mask their true feeling until they find the one person worthy of seeing the real them

Masked Love

by kassaundrachur1

A beautiful young girl who every guy loved

But the guys didn't know that on the inside she hates

Herself

Perfect shape perfect hair perfect mask

She gets asked out countless times but refuses

She is waiting for the one guy who knows that she is wearing

A mask

She thinks that there will never be hope for her

That no guy will love her

Until now . A random guy walks up

She sees the cuts on his wrists as he tries to hide them

She can see the fake smile and she says to him

"Take off your mask"

At first the guy is bewildered but then he realizes

She sees my mask because I see hers

He removes his mask and lets the true him show

He doesn't even remember the last time he showed the true

Him. She finally dropped her mask and they just stood

There staring into each other's soul!

After 3 hours passed they began to walk and talk about

Their pasts and their future

The girl finally found a guy worthy of seeing the true her

This is no longer masked love 👹

It is unmasked 😀

They realized they were so alike and bonded

Through their struggles

The became happy for once

They became eternally together

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kassaundrachur1Bronze CommaI write about serious issues in society
8 months agoReply
@bernardtwindwil that's very true!! Definitely some stuff to pick at my brain for my next story

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
8 months agoReply
@kassaundrachur1 Happy endings are challenging because you must tie up all the loose ends. In a tragic ending you can leave the threads of your story in tragic disarray.

kassaundrachur1Bronze CommaI write about serious issues in society
8 months agoReply
@bernardtwindwil That is very true but I wanted to make a story where for once it had a happy ending

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
8 months agoReply
@kassaundrachur1 Two broken people getting on in such a miraculous manner is highly unlikely. It is bad enough when one is broken. In my years I have seen many of these miracle relationships end in horror. If you cannot love yourself you cannot love another person. Thos such people bring way to much baggage into a relationship. It is a wonderful fantasy and story though.

kassaundrachur1Bronze CommaI write about serious issues in society
8 months agoReply
@bernardtwindwil thank you very much!!' What do you mean by you don't think this really happens?

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
8 months agoReply
I'm not sure this really happens. This was beautifully written. The verses had a lyrical quality. Great job!!!