Life's Garden
Life's Garden sadpoetry stories
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kamilokwiek
kamilokwiek 20/Uni student/Polish
Autoplay OFF   •   8 months ago
I would like to feedback on thah poem, I'm a beginner!

Life's Garden

Dead rose left on the side of the road

Wishes to be picked up like

Daisy by neglectful child

Recklessness strike again

And there are many fresh roses on child's grave

An orchid admired by mass

Daffodil staring in with loathe

Full of jealousy and hatred

It wants what an orchid has

A life in captivity and imprisonment

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