Bridge
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justshutupxdA writer making the world brighter
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Bridge

by justshutupxd

You know how when you're in a car,

And it's pouring down rain,

You go under a bridge

And everything stops.

Everything goes silent,

And it's almost peaceful

Then you finally get from under the bridge,

And everything hits you a little harder than before.

You were my bridge.

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bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
7 months agoReply
@justshutupxd We often sell ourselves short. You saw the overpass and divined the metaphor. Nothing seemed extraordinary because you have a talent for it and, "No big deal.", is what you thought to yourself. When you published it, other perceptive people can see your genius where you see routine. Keep thinking!!!

justshutupxdBronze CommaA writer making the world brighter
7 months agoReply
@bernardtwindwil Again thanks. It didn't really seem so sophisticated going under that overpass on the interstate a couple days ago. It just seemed rather sad.

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
7 months agoReply
I don't think you are such a simple girl. This was certainly a sophisticated metaphor you used. Great post!!!