Problems
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jennyhayniac 'LD' musiclover
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Problems

by jenny

I must leave you now

it's all I can say

no! its impossible

life with out you I think its a mistake

you always finds me

with out searching for me

so how can I take you away

even with out knowing how you come to me

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a year ago
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jennyBronze Commahayniac 'LD' musiclover
a year agoReply
@lentis thanks!!

lentisSilver CommaIf there's food, there's me
a year agoReply
i agree, this is really fantastic!

jennyBronze Commahayniac 'LD' musiclover
a year agoReply
@bernardtwindwil thanks a lot I really do appreciate it! i will continue to look on things beyond our limits

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
@jenny yes it is good. It is better than good. I can see into your​ depth of understanding concerning life.

jennyBronze Commahayniac 'LD' musiclover
a year agoReply
@bernardtwindwil but what do you think, is it good?

jennyBronze Commahayniac 'LD' musiclover
a year agoReply
@bernardtwindwil thanks for those words, maybe its just somehow different to me. its all about my life :)

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
I thought you did a really great job at keeping the reader's interest while referring to the generic and cryptic "problems". "life with out you I think its a mistake" this is an exceptional line. Problems are ubiquitous. Life would be so bland without them. They are the hot sauce of life.