Craze man - An Exemplum(5/5)
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Craze man - An Exemplum(5/5)

by imanephraim23

The words I use are simple The kids won't grow up In they upstairs when they think Of Earth they look downwards only their crowns reach upwards

It's the devils plan ?

It's more of a different level scan

Throw up the poison juice from the cups With the poops fight the way of the stuck up They refuse to come down because they fear

Do the sign of the cross before you open my page

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bernardtwindwilGifted WriterGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
9 months agoReply
@imanephraim23 I would love to hear your thought processes. I find your work fascinating.

9 months agoReply
@bernardtwindwil also I'll be more than happy to explain

9 months agoReply
I appreciate that you read all of them and you put down the analysis. All the words I used were meant to be there , I chose to put them together the way they are and they may sound off but that's how I write. The words are simple but the idea behind it is complex. Thank you again for reading them! There's more

bernardtwindwilGifted WriterGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
9 months agoReply
This was a satisfying conclusion. I think it is exemplary because you did not succumb to popular pap. You carried your theme to the conclusion. You do need to proof read this. I am not sure that some words you used were the right ones for the story. I would love to sit beside you and go through this word for word. I think it is brilliant and has the capability of reaching millions of people. Great job on this series!!!!!