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icreateasispeakA tired soul with a lot on her mind.
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Sometimes people tell you to out your heart into everything you do,
Then you wonder later on why you're so empty

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by icreateasispeak

Each and every day it feels

Like pieces and pieces of me

Are drifting away

Oh love, how can I make you stay?

If I myself Have already gone Far, far Away.

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I loved it. This was mellifluous. You evoked emotion with your wording that was sad but not maudlin. Your verse left me with an eerie sense of loss. Great job!!! Now, as for your above statement. " Pouring your heart into something" is a meaningless phrase. When you do something, make it yours, make it part of you. But don't do that with everything that would be nonsense. Pick your causes carefully and let the other stuff go. You can only do what you can do. Then forget the rest.