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hunyoxlayneLoving someone patiently
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Once

by hunyoxlayne

My life is peaceful like a dove

until you came and taught me how to love

BUT

You have too many ways to make me happy

yet too many times you caused much pain on me

Give me time to think

give me a reason to stay

I will walk through the rain

and I will wait for you to say

Once, there was a man lost himself

but found love in your loving arms

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turnmypagesBronze CommaFrustrated writer and guitarist.
a year agoReply
Nice piece again :)

hunyoxlayneLoving someone patiently
a year agoReply
@bernardtwindwil thank you for your kind words :)

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
You did an excellent job with the graphics. They helped your message. The writing is emotive and has a sweet but not cloying taste to it. I liked the way the entire poem was constructed​ and delivered.