Falling Stars
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hideandseekWriter, poet, singer, artist, runner...
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In honor of the birth of my beloved country. There will always be bright sparks in a time of darkness.

Falling Stars

By hideandseek

Fireworks shooting across the sky, Reaching for freedom,

Tails trailing behind Before crashing down.

Comets falling in reverse, Racing for the stars.

Instead of burning out as they crash down,

They're comets burning up As they hit oblivion.

A mini supernova igniting Below our atmosphere;

A wonder to behold.

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hideandseekWriter, poet, singer, artist, runner...
a year agoReply
@sydney thank you I'm so glad you liked it!!! If you do end up sharing it, please let me know!! I'd love to hear what others may have thought about it :)

hideandseekWriter, poet, singer, artist, runner...
a year agoReply
@bernardtwindwil thank you very much, that means a lot to me! :)

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
That was powerfully emotive. Your deft use of the graphics to enhance your message was magnificent. The verse was symbolic and solid at the same time . Like fireworks, you exploded in a flash of brilliance and then pulled in back into a peaceful dark revery.

sydneyVerifiedco-creator of Commaful
a year agoReply
@hideandseek love it! i think we may share this on the 4th of July!

a year agoReply
@hideandseek yess.....get that bug spray haha. i love fireworks

hideandseekWriter, poet, singer, artist, runner...
a year agoReply
@george Yes I am!!! And get eaten alive by bugs while I do so, but you know it's totally worth it haha

a year agoReply
beautiful!!! happy independence day!! are you going to watch the fireworks?