SOUP
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heidilobeckerCommunity member
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Acrostic SOUP poem, because my son does not like tomato soup

SOUP

by K. Surve (age 9)

S O U P

Super hot Occasionally cold Unsatisfying flavor Pours nicely

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4 months agoReply
I love SOUP

4 months agoReply
@bernardtwindwil thank you! I'll tell my son, he wrote the poem!

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
4 months agoReply
I love homemade soup. I can't stand canned soup. I loved this poem!!!!!~