No one said, "Together..."
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grishmavasaniCommunity member
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Voice of a girl who never got guts to confess her love!!!

No one said, "Together..."

by grishmavasani

I remember the practicals, Where first we met,

Just beside each other, As neighbours, we sat......

Your mesmerizing eyes, Made me go mute,

Your smile stole my heart, That had dimples deep and cute......

Reserved, was the thing, You always liked to stay,

And me! Lot many talks to you, I wished to say.......

You were shy, Where I was an open book,

To finally accept me as your friend, Almost a year you took......

For me, in my list of crushes, You stand first,

At that time we were just random people, But still I felt your worthy to trust......

Never got guts, To express your importance for me,

You are something awesome happened in my life, You'll always be an amazing chapter of my history.......

The least I expressed, More my emotions rose,

Remembering you was what I always chose.......

I hug my pillow, Imagining you,

Before I sleep, I wish, All my dreams come true......

Preparing gifts, Writing letter,

Expressing my feelings for you through poems, Make me feel satisfied and better......

All my rubbish questions, And all your smart reply,

To just have your glance, I always die........

During your chats, Your unexpected text,

You always forget the previous, And quickly reply the next...

Our story would definitely continue further,

But as the title says,"They lived happily after,

But no one said, "Together...!!"

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grishmavasaniCommunity member
3 months ago
Broken 💔
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bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
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a year agoReply
@therinamartins that means a lot to me coming from someone for my writing!! thnks a lot!! @sydney thnk u so much for the comment!!

sydneyVerifiedco-creator of Commaful
a year agoReply
this is so beautiful!!! fantastic job!

therinamartinsSilver CommaWriter and Friend
a year agoReply
I'm tearing up right now... Great job on the poem!

a year agoReply
@jinamvora Thnk u soo much 😘

a year agoReply
Awesome😍❤

a year agoReply
@bernardtwindwil Thnk u so much but to be frank i have no guy in my life!! And i wish if ever someone comes would be my first and last time!!! Thnx for the vote and comment!!!!

a year agoReply
@marino Thnx for the support but it would be the first time itself if ever something like this happens with me 😅😀

marinoBronze Commahehe
a year agoReply
there is always a next time :)

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
This was poignant and bittersweet. There will always be a next time. Show him this poem first. The greatest credit has to go to your use of a trite phrase and actually making an artistic twist on it.

a year agoReply
Awesome!!