Our Fault//Our Stars
Our Fault//Our Stars the fault in our stars stories
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This is a dedication to the book The Fault In Our Stars, and also a hello to Augustus Waters, who has an account on Commaful

Our Fault//Our Stars

Hello! This is a quick author's note (poet's note?) before the poem begins. I'm actually pretty proud of this since it took me around 3 hours nonstop trying to perfect it. But as some of you know, Augustus Waters is actually on Commaful

And I know he said that The Fault In Our Stars isn't accurate at the end, but I still wanted to make this tribute for him and Hazel. I hope y'all like it! - Artemis

Life can deliver unexpected news

Life can deliver unexpected news The way you handle the outcome is something to choose.

Hazel Grace was young when she was dealt her fate

Hazel Grace was young when she was dealt her fate Cancer consumed her thyroid then lungs, she deteriorated at a slow rate.

She never did give up, even when hearing her mother's sobbing whispers of believing she would die

She never did give up, even when hearing her mother's sobbing whispers of believing she would die Hazel regained strength enough to attend activities in the literal heart of Jesus with the ball-less, guitar guy.

Then one day Augustus Waters appeared out of the blue

Then one day Augustus Waters appeared out of the blue Blind Isaac's friend without a leg and a half-smile Hazel viewed.

He stared at this sickly teen with compassion and curiosity in his eyes

He stared at this sickly teen with compassion and curiosity in his eyes Hazel stared back wondering why anyone would fall for a person that would soon die.

Augustus pulled out a cigarette and placed it in between his teeth

Augustus pulled out a cigarette and placed it in between his teeth A metaphor that could never kill him but brought comfort beneath.

After the lesson, he immediately made plans to watch a movie

After the lesson, he immediately made plans to watch a movie He drove like a maniac but Hazel thought he was pretty groovy.

The time she shared with this new soul was overwhelmingly amazing

The time she shared with this new soul was overwhelmingly amazing The cancer was soon forgotten and their mutual desires were blazing.

She revealed her one kept secret- "An Imperial Affliction"

She revealed her one kept secret- "An Imperial Affliction" Her favorite book and his "The Price of Dawn" - Max Mayhem's adventures became her new addiction.

He loved her Natalie Portman style, oxygen tank Phillip, and witty charm

He loved her Natalie Portman style, oxygen tank Phillip, and witty charm She loved how he never let his cancer make him feel alarmed.

He was on a roller-coaster that only went up, that was his daily quote

He was on a roller-coaster that only went up, that was his daily quote Hazel felt intrigued by this optimistic note.

She slowly relapsed when water filled her lungs

She slowly relapsed when water filled her lungs Telling her dream guy to leave this grenade while their love was still young.

Monica ditched Isaac when hearing he would lose his sight

Monica ditched Isaac when hearing he would lose his sight Augustus let his best friend break his existentially-fraught free-throw trophies and throw eggs at her car with all his pain and might.

Phone calls/texts quickly showed "okay" was Hazel and Augustus' term

Phone calls/texts quickly showed "okay" was Hazel and Augustus' term This was a word that portrayed their love could always be reaffirmed.

A swing set in Hazel's backyard soon brings her to tears

A swing set in Hazel's backyard soon brings her to tears Augustus helps her give it to a new family to use for many years.

They fell in love with the way you fall asleep, slowly then all at once

They fell in love with the way you fall asleep, slowly then all at once Their love grew unbreakable in those shortly shared months.

Although Augustus knew the world was not a wish-granting factory

Although Augustus knew the world was not a wish-granting factory He had a plan that he believed Hazel would think satisfactory

Hazel's dying wish was used in Disney, Augustus ashamed but still kept his for the perfect time

Hazel's dying wish was used in Disney, Augustus ashamed but still kept his for the perfect time To see author Peter van Houten was a dream for Hazel and he made it come true- they would see him in Amsterdam while still in their prime.

A night in Amsterdam Hazel will never forget: drinking star-infused champagne and eating decadent food with a boy who wore a suit for the dead

A night in Amsterdam Hazel will never forget: drinking star-infused champagne and eating decadent food with a boy who wore a suit for the dead Later they shared intimacy and Hazel Grace left a diagram for her love- Augustus was no longer a virgin with one leg and he chuckled at what she said.

The next day they went to see the genius van Houten and Hazel dressed like Anna, trying to contain her emotions Turns out he was simply a rude drunk and after calling him "douche-pants" they stormed out but the stewardess came with a kind notion.

She took them both to the house of Anne Frank

She took them both to the house of Anne Frank Sharing a kiss words cannot describe, they left and gave thanks.

Before leaving back to the States, Hazel could tell Augustus holds back

Before leaving back to the States, Hazel could tell Augustus holds back He finally states the cancer lit his body like a Christmas tree and Hazel's heart felt attacked.

Back in Indiana she cares for her dying lover

Back in Indiana she cares for her dying lover She finds him trying to buy cigs and infected from his disease, he was trying so hard to cover.

Augustus knows he is going to die so he asks Isaac and Hazel to meet him in the literal heart of Jesus, each with a eulogy

Augustus knows he is going to die so he asks Isaac and Hazel to meet him in the literal heart of Jesus, each with a eulogy He wants to attend his own funeral, hearing Isaac crack jokes and Hazel thanking him for their little infinity was stated so beautifully.

A few weeks later Augustus dies

A few weeks later Augustus dies No energy for living, Hazel cannot remove the tears from her eyes.

She did not share her heart-felt letter at his funeral because she wanted their love to remain within each other's hearts

She did not share her heart-felt letter at his funeral because she wanted their love to remain within each other's hearts She dictated kind words then was greeted by van Houten, finding out his daughter was Anna and died from cancer, drinking eased the fact that they would always be apart.

Isaac relinquished to Hazel that Augustus wrote to her before his time ended

Isaac relinquished to Hazel that Augustus wrote to her before his time ended van Houten e-mailed his writing and her heart was truly mended.

Reading his ideology that he liked his choices of who hurt him and he wondered if she did too

Reading his ideology that he liked his choices of who hurt him and he wondered if she did too Taking in this precious letter Hazel whipered, "I do Augustus, I do".

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