The Most Accomplished Thief
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ghostfulWhat I feel is what you get
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My first love was a thief

The Most Accomplished Thief

by ghostful

My first love was a thief

And to this day I believe

That she managed to make off with both the sun and the sky

The sky for those aching baby blue eyes

Or perfect liquid silver hues

And the sun for that smile

The one that lights up her entire face

And mine

My first love stole so much from me

She tore the breathe from my lungs

Stole kisses from my lips

Took my heart and made it beat so erratically

Took it right off my sleeve and stitched it to her own

My first love was the one to capture my vision of the world

To take my hand and run

Whisking me away until

Every little pointless thing faded away

Falling for her was like letting go

She stole from me the world I knew

And made it into something beautiful

So that every day was gushing with life

And glowed in the same way her eyes did

My first love was such an accomplished thief

That even after months and months without her

She still has a piece of my heart

But that's ok...

She may of been a thief

But I would've given her all of those things for free

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ghostfulGifted WriterWhat I feel is what you get
8 months agoReply
@riverfr0zen It might be so :) thank you!

riverfr0zenBronze Commawriter, programmer, photographer?
8 months agoReply
Great piece. All I can say is, buckle up, it might be a long and worthwhile journey.

ghostfulGifted WriterWhat I feel is what you get
8 months agoReply
@maximinorosas I'm so glad you like it! The piece means a lot to me :)

ghostfulGifted WriterWhat I feel is what you get
8 months agoReply
@sydney Aw thank you! It means a lot :)

ghostfulGifted WriterWhat I feel is what you get
8 months agoReply
@bernardtwindwil Aw thank you so much! I'm so glad you like it! This poem means a lot to me so thank you :)

HeroTheTurtleBronze CommaPretty words, sad stories.
8 months agoReply
This is easily one of my favorite posts

sydneyVerifiedco-creator of Commaful
8 months agoReply
This is so beautiful ❤️❤️

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
8 months agoReply
Beautiful just beautiful. I read through your words to your soul. It was beautiful too. Ther structure and composition of this poem are outstanding. The message is pure gold. You set a mood of melancholy without bitterness and you did not wallow in it. Great job!!