Thinking Straight
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floralfriendJust someone who likes poetry :)
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I can't think straight, for my feelings are too strong

Thinking Straight

by floralfriend

I get drunk off of the smell of your cologne

Tipsy off the way you look at me

I'm intoxicated by the way my skin feels on yours

I get high off of taste of your lips against my own

In the clouds from your smile alone

I'm drifting from reality from how your voice sounds to me

I cannot think straight due to how you make me feel

Head and mind farther away than they were alone

For every smile yours makes me feel the most bliss

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bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
Thie is some great stuff. I wish I had these lines memorized in high school or better yet in college. They are tenderly sweet without being cloying. I still feel that way about my wife of forty-one years.

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
@sydney @erofaer This would really be convenient. I could come up with 2 or 3 canned comments and spread the love everywhere in a single post.

sydneyVerifiedco-creator of Commaful
a year agoReply
@erofaer @bernardtwindwil I believe this should be fixed now. We just put up a bug fix that I think fixes that problem. Let me know if it happens again!

erofaerSilver CommaHow can I be impressive in one sentence?
a year agoReply
@sydney Every time @bernardtwindwil comments on my post "My First Kiss" it seems the comments appear on other posts.

sydneyVerifiedco-creator of Commaful
a year agoReply
@erofaer @bernardtwindwil oh snap! so sorry to hear that. can you explain in what situation it's happening? i noticed a few randomly floating comments earlier so was confused.

erofaerSilver CommaHow can I be impressive in one sentence?
a year agoReply
I love it, getting drunk on love. Nice job! (btw sorry about my other comment there's a weird glitch!)

erofaerSilver CommaHow can I be impressive in one sentence?
a year agoReply
@bernardtwindwil I see the problem. There's a glitch which is putting your comments on other stories, too. @sydney could you help us out? Somehow his comments have been appearing everywhere else even when they were originally meant for one story, and it's caused a lot of confusion.

sueCommabassadori'm strong
a year agoReply
great love poem!