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Memory
by felonious
Do you remember your first heartbreak?
The first time you cried yourself to sleep?
Do you remember the first time you lost yourself?...
In a conscious wakeful sleep?
I do.
It seems that what I remember best,
is that which hurt the most.
That which I wish I could forget,
Yet never will.
How could I forget you?
You're all I ever had, You're all I'll ever need.
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bernardtwindwil
Granddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
Granddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com10 months ago•Reply•
@felonious Naturally, I have a story about this. Since I was a tadpole. When I got into a dangerous situation, I would make up headlines. "Man and son drown in Tulare River while fishing" or "Bus crashes killing entire baseball team." Later in my adolescence, I would say them aloud and everyone would yell at me to shut-up. I have always seen my life as a literary masterpiece. I give you praise. That is a gift which you have earned. A compliment is a loan you have to repay. I very seldom give compliments.
10 months ago•Reply•
@bernardtwindwil I've recently changed me major from business administration to english with a concentration in writing, it is words like these that are the motivation that keeps me writing. It has proliferated my every thought, every moment throughout my day is punctuated with a thought of how I may be able to create it into a literary piece. Bernard, thank you. You are a true gentleman
bernardtwindwilGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
Granddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com10 months ago•Reply•
This is a sensitive and tender description of what I dare say is an experience that we all have experienced. You worded it in such a way that magically made it a repeat of our own feeling of so long ago. Great job!!!
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