To Wonder if the Pain is there
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fakerosesI was born as a burden to the world
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Can't get past the tragedy....

To Wonder if the Pain is there

If endless sorrow steals you far away

Tell me our hearts won’t fully separate

No words will fill the distance that may lay

Cause your eyes won’t be as desperate

And if time can’t heal your wounds completely

Recollect the thoughts you once had before

To when a goodbye was said scarcely

So you can have the memories to conjure

Through loss we learned of a tomorrow

I could finally see your pale face

While we passed each other’s lifeless shadow

Yet with long strides I couldn’t keep your pace

As if it was still that day, together Inside of you......

Inside of you, fated and forever

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LostInMyDreamsCommabassadorDelving deeper into the unknown
10 months agoReply
@fakeroses Same here! I'm a newbie here, but I blog on Wordpress. I like the visuals Commaful has. It adds another layer to our work.

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
10 months agoReply
This was really well written and lucid. The flow of your words was mellifluous. Tragedy and pain seem to sometimes dominate our lives. As such they hide the future from us with all its hope and glory. Great work!!!!

fakerosesI was born as a burden to the world
10 months agoReply
@LostInMyDreams I'm glad you enjoyed it, also I appreciate you being my first comment. The whole Commaful way of writing is new to me.

LostInMyDreamsCommabassadorDelving deeper into the unknown
10 months agoReply
I really enjoyed reading this. I also love your name!