somebody make a move
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elizabethyoehlets try this one out
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somebody make a move

by elizabethyoeh

Test my reality Check if there's a weak spot Clingin' to insanity In hopes the world will ease up

Try to make it look like it's all somehow getting better 'Cause I know how to play it pretty good against the measure Everyone started out a little insane But we learn pretty quick how to fa

But some of you never learned to drop the act So under that skin of yours: a heart attack

And I dare not preach what I don't understand

You and I; we share the same disease Cover up; compromise what we grieve I've let more than my share of revivals die This isn't pretty but it's what I am tonight

Pointing my fingers the problems still linger They keep getting bigger and I hold the trigger Running with fire, I live like a liar Please somebody make a move

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tabnash24Silver CommaYou'll know me as you read ;)
a year agoReply
This is well thought but just some editing is required, otherwise it's cool :)

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
I love the internal rhymes and the alliteration. This was highly creative. Commaful's formating gave you some hiccups. I think having another person proof read this before​ posting would have been fruitful. Good job.