In the sky
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dorrarLook for the hidden meanings
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In the sky

by dorrar

She falls down, submitting us to darkness

Then rises to guide us

Before drifting away yet again, hoping we don't follow

But yet new lights shine in her absence, giving us hope

Though what if she doesn't come back

And we are left in the dark with no where else to go...

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a year agoReply
Thank you @bernardtwindwil @shana @venice

bernardtwindwilGold CommaGranddad & story teller, tomthepo8.com
a year agoReply
Beautiful visuals. All ancient people worshiped the sun and stars. I still do. You alluded to the sun with artistically tasteful words. Simply marvelous feelings came from my reading​ this poem.

shanaCommabassadorCommunity member
a year agoReply
beautifully expressed. indeed so clear and mysterious as @venice put very nicely

veniceBronze Commatwitter: @muyven
a year agoReply
i like how you write it with mysterious and clear visions at the same time.