Unfinished Song (a collaboration with @soothrain)
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A collaboration with the amazing, beautiful and kind @soothrain aka Anmol <3

Unfinished Song (a collaboration with @soothrain)

Hello wonderful people, This is a collaboration by me and Anmol. She is one of the most amazing people and writer I've come to know on Commaful. I hope you like it :)

I riddled my digits,

I riddled my digits, on blacks and whites,

I riddled my digits, on blacks and whites, playing an off-key Beethoven

the frequencies

the frequencies didn't blend in,

the frequencies didn't blend in, my music is an

the frequencies didn't blend in, my music is an avalanche

the frequencies didn't blend in, my music is an a v a l a n c h e

the frequencies didn't blend in, my music is an a a a c e v l n h

the frequencies didn't blend in, my music is an a l c e v a h a n

the frequencies didn't blend in, my music is an a l c e v a h a n

the frequencies didn't blend in, my music is an a v a l a n c h e

the frequencies didn't blend in, my music is an a v a l a n c h e in this calm.

that is

that is u

that is u n

that is u n e

that is u n v e

that is u e n v e

that is u e n v n e

that is u e n v n e l

that is u e n v n y e l

that is u e n v n y harmonized, e l

that is u e n v n y harmonized. e l A severed tale,

that is u e n v n y harmonized. e l A severed tale, of unsaid things

that is u e n v n y harmonized. e l A severed tale, of unsaid things that haunts me

like a product of

like a product of intermittent humor

like a product of intermittent humor of my psyche.

My lyrically insane

My lyrically insane time signatures

My lyrically insane time signatures cough the dust

My lyrically insane time signatures cough the dust of a lonely time

the notes fall

the notes fall like dominoes,

the notes fall like dominoes, a wildfire spreads

the notes fall like dominoes, a wildfire spreads in my quintessence.

Fractured tunes

Fractured tunes collide with

Fractured tunes collide with euphonious octaves.

The keys flutter

The keys flutter like humming bird's wings.

One,

One, and two,

One, and two, and three,

concocting

concocting dissonantly

concocting dissonantly hypnotic

concocting dissonantly hypnotic musicality.

A dull catacomb

A dull catacomb e c h o e s

A dull catacomb e c h o e s of a broken piano's melody,

A dull catacomb e c h o e s of a broken piano's melody, one

A dull catacomb e c h o e s of a broken piano's melody, one last

A dull catacomb e c h o e s of a broken piano's melody, one last time.

-Soothrain and dogslinwriter

I enjoyed making this collab so much and Anmol is a very kind and lovely person. She came up with the prompt 'broken piano' and we wrote this, I hope you liked it. I look forward to more collabs with you hun, much love xx

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