In the State of Tranquility
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dissonanceAnd everything in you is a dream
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Reality verse dream.

In the State of Tranquility

by dissonance

When you're dreaming a surreal dream and you cannot tell the difference between your dream and reality, they tell you to look for something that is out of place.

Something that is missing.

When you look up at the dark sky and you wonder to yourself, "where are the stars?" When you stop and ask yourself, "where is the quite hum of the night?"

When something is missing, that is when you know you're asleep and dreaming.

But what happens when you wake up and realize that you are missing something from this reality and only in your dreams do you feel like you are whole and all the pieces fit.

Then do you choose to sleep forever or walk this life always looking for the missing piece, not even knowing what you're missing or who?

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tabnash24Silver CommaYou'll know me as you read ;)
6 months agoReply
@dissonance You're welcome, I'll be looking forward to read more. :)

dissonanceGifted WriterAnd everything in you is a dream
6 months agoReply
@tabnash24 It's a shame that dreams are forgotten so fast, so easily. All they do is give us a sense of longing for something we don't even recognize. But thank you so much, it means a lot to me and knowing I was able to present my idea clearly. ^v^

tabnash24Silver CommaYou'll know me as you read ;)
6 months agoReply
Very few write about dreams because most of them are immediately forgotten when you open your eyes while some leave behind a blurry scene or two which makes it hard to interpret. I adored the way you presented it and dragged reality in so that your readers take a moment to wonder. Good job! Really loved the thought. ;)

dissonanceGifted WriterAnd everything in you is a dream
6 months agoReply
@_lost_girl_14 Thank you so much. :D Hahaha but you're right. It's hard to tell the difference between the two and it seems that the older you get the harder it is. Reality pushes at you from one end and dreams push at you from the other end.

dissonanceGifted WriterAnd everything in you is a dream
6 months agoReply
@bernardtwindwil Thank you :) It means a lot to me and knowing that I was able to write this concept well is really encouraging.

dissonanceGifted WriterAnd everything in you is a dream
6 months agoReply
@tina @darklyloved Thank you guys so much >v<

LostInMyDreamsCommabassadorDelving deeper into the unknown
6 months agoReply
Wow!! This really makes you think! Well written and great concept.

_lost_girl_14a girl with countless stories.
6 months agoReply
Wow. I still can't distinguish between my dreams and reality. lol. but this was beautifully written <3

_lost_girl_14a girl with countless stories.
6 months agoReply
Wow. I still can't distinguish between my dreams and reality. lol. but this was beautifully written <3

dissonanceGifted WriterAnd everything in you is a dream
6 months agoReply
@everyman Yup, I got you buddy.