Hurt
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delaneypalumboEveryone I loves leaves & I write it
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You hurt me to the point of no return and left with no bruises to show for it.

Hurt

by delaneypalumbo

I was on a ride. A beautiful ride full of new exciting places and people.

My ride was just beginning when I met you. You were wonderful and great and so I pulled you onto my ride & you pulled me onto yours.

We kept spinning. Day after day. Even when the ride got bumpy we kept on.

But then one day you got sick of my ride. I still believed you were the best and I wanted you along for the rest of the journey but you had new adventures to seek.

So I let you go, you stepped off. However I skipped one step of the process. I never stepped off, I held on tighter than ever.

So that eventually I was hurt. I was bruised. And I was tired.

We were on this ride, you escaped without a cut, but I am laying in a hospital bed begging for life.

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tdog16Gifted Writer14 and excited!
6 months agoReply
I didn't really get the last part...did she attempt to die? But that story was so beautifully composed. The figurative language with the ride was absolutely amazing! This book was SO well written but I didn't like the part where you said that he got off the ride without a cut. I have been him once...I have to sadly admit...but they don't get off without a cut.

regitataeHappy doesn't suit me.
6 months agoReply
this is such a well-written poem.